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Friday, August 5, 2016

remcos free writeing

MY SHIFTS AT FAZBEARS FRIGHT



I was just sitting in my home reading the paper when I spotted a new job.
At first I thought oh noooo freddy's pizzaaaaa but it was not a pizzeria, it’s an attraction, a horror attraction and I love those I went to see if there was a job application they said there was one “oh cool”. When do I start “RIGHT NOW” and with that he ran. Dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun 12 am first night the phone rang I let him talk bla bla blaaaaaaaaaaaaa he chated all night. next night 12am night 2 this time there was something interesting they found one, a real one I found the cameras, pulled them up and saw a hybrid and said hey I don’t remember you, all of a sudden it’s head twitched, the camera became all static then he was gone I found him on the next cam and saw his eye looking at it. He moved again. I looked at the clock 2am I went on the camera and found was it bb? I went off the camera and BOOM a new jumpscare from the rest I could not help but breath heavily the vents were offline I found the reboot panel and rebooted the ventilation dop dop dop dop dop I went off the reboot panel 3am I looked at him again he was not on the camera, I found how to toggle the camera and saw him in the vent 4am he was out and looking at me through the window


I just stared not moving 5am the alarm sound I could not breath he was gone, ding dong ding dong ding dong ding dong, It powered off I went to the owner and said “I QUIT”.

The end












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5 comments:

  1. Awesome story Remco! I like the theme and the way you writ it. you have done well to try and base it off the real game, I can't wait for part two. What you could do next time is that you could have the picture more clear and you could name more of the animitronics. Keep up the good writing!

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  2. It's kind of a different story the next one its more like i'm doing all the games. This next one will be better. Thanks for your helpful comment

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  3. interesting story remco i really licked it keep the work up.

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    1. Thanks andrew by the way you said lick instead of like.

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