remcos free writing 2

My shifts at freddys pizza 1

I had just got fired from my job so I decided to look in the paper

I called the number 1-888-faz-fazbear. No reply. I tried again. No reply. I thought 3rd times the charm ‘ “hello, hello hello, hey are you here for the new night guard job” “yes I am” “ well then you start tonight” and then he hung up. I found freddy fazbear's pizza it's 11:59 let's get into this shall we. 12:am 1st night all good there all on… wait what do i do there Sitting there. WHAT signal interference. OH, OK THEY MOVE WOAH DAMN where is he

I was about to find bonnie when chica moved.

OH NO well where are they not outside my door, or the hallways... WOAH

What time is it 2am woah time flies when your lifes in danger haha I decided to record a message on the phone. It was 5:59 when I was done and then the power cut out freddy started to play toreador march then he stopped he just stood there

I checked my watch still 5:59 NO 6:AM!!! YES!! Screw you freddy fazbear. I decided to go back there nothing happend at 12:am 1:am I checked pirate's cove

2:am 81 percent power. Ok foxy leave me alone I now I bring down the camera you're gone

FINE he started to run just at 3:am I shut the door I checked the other one and saw chica outside the window wow she is ugly 3:am I recorded another message on the phone until 6:am I didn’t run out of power JUST. ok this is weird the stage is empty but It's only 1:59 well I recorded to 3:40 and then heard freddy play toreador march but he's not here I should ignore It after all It 4:am and i’m doing well 5:am now I heard freddy laugh I shut both doors because I thought I had enough power then I saw the freddy poster change to... fredbear? No. It is. I changed camera

6:am woah this could be a good night have this job down but I didn’t there was more I was struggling and bonnie was in my office I decided I was not going to win I put down the camera saw bonnie and got jumpscared, my recording was cut you know the fredbear suit they found it and the last thing I remembered was agonising pain.

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My space trip was a disaster (first draft)

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• A twist to add interest to your writing.

This is just my first draft I still have to make tons of improvements>

MY SPACE TRIP

I was sitting alone waiting to make my country proud. I was sitting In the rocket thinking deeply, mostly about my best friend John and how I was to be a hero to my younger cousin humans for I am a chimp. not that random guy outside the spaceship, I got strapped in the chair, a tad tight the countdown began, “10, 9, 8 ,7 ,6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.” chhhhhhh offfffff!! “We have lift off!”

I was waiting to blow up, when I was leaving earth kaboom I was out.

The radio buzzed, “Space chimp, have you made it?”

I let out a screech. “SPACE CHIMP IS IN SPACE goodnight ham and happy 1961.” Announced best friend Jhon.

65 years later. I wake up slowly I try to move then I remembered and thought is it 1983 already wait I saw the control panel and I found It was 65 YEARS woah. Maybe I should see if the thing the humans call the milky way is around. No but the sun is Its beautiful wait there the milky way is then I saw my reflection then I thought who is he then I realized they we’re right. We all grow old. Well looks like I have grown whiskers I spoke on the radio no reply. DO THEY THINK I’M DEAD, well then two can play at that game I saw earth I was coming in to land. I closed my eyes. I was scared, I knew John was gone I didn’t know what to do maybe I was interrupted by the parachute going out some time later I landed on terra firma.

Where am I? This Is not home. THIS IS NOT EARTH, this is a wasteland. I must find someone to help me. I saw some chimps and humans around some with the phones in hand, some walking around zombies and some running for their lives. I asked some of the chimps what had happened. They said people stopped caring for the environment and started catching Pokemon instead, the the app turned people into zombies and they reanimated the dead as well.

Then I heard someone yell, “YES A MEWTWO!” This is weird WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? Then someone tried to squash me because someone, thought I was a Pokemon but they couldn’t catch me I realized he thought I was Mewtwo. I ran and ran and ran. I took cover somewhere then someone found me. I had to run again then I tripped and fell, I started to back up but I hit a wall . They were about to strike me down, then I woke up to find It was a dream. My space adventure was a dream. I Was just a baby chimp in a colony.

	Punctuation	Vocabulary
Self	R5
Peer	R4

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MY SHIFTS AT FAZBEARS FRIGHT

I was just sitting in my home reading the paper when I spotted a new job.

At first I thought oh noooo freddy's pizzaaaaa but it was not a pizzeria, it’s an attraction, a horror attraction and I love those I went to see if there was a job application they said there was one “oh cool”. When do I start “RIGHT NOW” and with that he ran. Dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun 12 am first night the phone rang I let him talk bla bla blaaaaaaaaaaaaa he chated all night. next night 12am night 2 this time there was something interesting they found one, a real one I found the cameras, pulled them up and saw a hybrid and said hey I don’t remember you, all of a sudden it’s head twitched, the camera became all static then he was gone I found him on the next cam and saw his eye looking at it. He moved again. I looked at the clock 2am I went on the camera and found was it bb? I went off the camera and BOOM a new jumpscare from the rest I could not help but breath heavily the vents were offline I found the reboot panel and rebooted the ventilation dop dop dop dop dop I went off the reboot panel 3am I looked at him again he was not on the camera, I found how to toggle the camera and saw him in the vent 4am he was out and looking at me through the window

I just stared not moving 5am the alarm sound I could not breath he was gone, ding dong ding dong ding dong ding dong, It powered off I went to the owner and said “I QUIT”.

The end

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