It is basically what you eat.
what's healthy and what's not.
we have learnt about food groups.
finally fats and sugars
Punctuation
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Vocabulary
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Self
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R5
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Peer
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R4
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Second draft
The lions failed feast
It was a typical day with the pack of lions, we were hunting for food, It was late June in the African Savannah.
It was a great day to lie in the sun, we were just minding our own business, we were lying next to the river, when we noticed some buffalo walking towards us. We had found lunch, or maybe it found us, we started to move closer and closer... BOOM!!! The chase was on, my friend managed to catch a calf, who got away but fell in the water. The smell of lunch was the best smell all day. We started to drag the buffalo calf out of the water when… SNAP!! A crocodile interrupted our meal, I was not happy with him. We tried to take it from him, it was tug war and the winner gets lunch. We were able to keep the calf but then the buffalos had came back.
Will we ever get lunch? I thought. We tried to stand our ground but there were too many. I felt sad and ashamed when I got kicked by our own food and went flying 5 metres across into the river. But after the end of the day we got something else to eat. The calf did taste nice though.
But even though we got food at the end of the day, I was angry that our food bossed us around! So now my pride and I wanted revenge...
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The lions failed feast (First draft)
It was a typical day with the pack of lions we were hunting for food, It was late June in the African Savannah.We saw some buffalo,we were waiting for the buffalo to get closer, then the other lions noticed a baby whom we decided to take back to the pride.
It was a great day to lie in the sun, we were just minding our own business, when we noticed some buffalo walking towards us. We had found lunch, or maybe it found us, I started to move closer and closer. BOOM!!! The chase was on, my friend managed to catch the calf who got away but fell in the water and the smell of lunch was the best smell all day. We started to drag the buffalo calf out of the water when… SNAP!! A crocodile interrupted our meal, I was not happy with him so we tried to take it from him it was tugowar and the winner gets lunch. We were able to keep the calf but then the buffalo had came back. Will we ever get lunch? I thought. We tried to stand our ground but there were too many I felt sad and ashamed when I got kicked by our own food and went flying 5 metres across into the river but after the end of the day we got something else to eat.The calf did taste nice though.
But even though we got food at the end of the day, I was angry that our food bossed us around! So now my pride and I want revenge...
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The buffalo’s are walking into unsuspecting danger
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Because the lions are camouflaged up ahead.
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This a close up on the lions getting ready to run.
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The lions have ran and the chase is on.
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The lions are getting ready to pounce on one of the buffalos
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The lions have caught the baby buffalo but a hungry crocodile has decided to show up.
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The lions won the battle but the buffalo have arrived once more to help the calf.
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The lions have decided to stay and stand their ground
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But the buffalo bravely won the fight
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Ako Ngatahi, Term 1, 2016
Remco’s Learning Goals
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My Goal
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Success Criteria
I know I have been successful when...
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Next Step
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Reading
To retell in detail what I have read
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To master this goal I have to:
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Writing
To use direct speech in my writing
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To master this goal I have to:
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Maths:
To master Stage 6, part 1:
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I must be able to group within 100 using 5’s, Addition (45____=100)
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