The lions failed feast( First draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

The lions failed feast (First draft) It was a typical day with the pack of lions we were hunting for food, It was late June in the African Savannah.We saw some buffalo,we were waiting for the buffalo to get closer, then the other lions noticed a baby whom we decided to take back to the pride.  It was  a great day to lie in the sun, we were just minding our own business,  when we noticed some buffalo walking towards us. We had found lunch, or maybe it found us, I started to move closer and closer. BOOM!!! The chase was on, my friend managed to catch the calf who got away but fell  in the water and the smell of lunch was the best smell all day. We started to drag the buffalo calf out of the water when… SNAP!! A crocodile interrupted our meal, I was not happy with him so we tried to take it from him it was tugowar and the winner gets lunch. We were able to keep the calf but then the buffalo had came back. Will we ever get lunch? I thought. We tried to stand our ground but there were too many I felt sad and ashamed when I got kicked by our own food and went flying 5 metres across into the river but after the end of the day we got something else to eat.The calf did taste nice though. But even though we got food at the end of the day, I was angry that our food bossed us around! So now my pride and I want revenge...

Remco's battle at Kruger sequence

This is my battle at Kruger sequence

REMCO’S BATTLE AT KRUGER

	The buffalo’s are walking into unsuspecting danger
	Because the lions are camouflaged up ahead.
	This a close up on the lions getting ready to run.
	The lions have ran and the chase is on.
	The lions are getting ready to pounce on one of the buffalos
	The lions have caught the  baby buffalo but a hungry crocodile has decided to show up.
	The lions won the battle but  the buffalo have arrived once more to help the calf.
	The lions have decided to stay and stand their ground
	But the buffalo bravely won the fight

Remco's learning goals

These are my learning goal's.

Ako Ngatahi, Term 1, 2016 Remco’s Learning Goals
My Goal	Success Criteria I know I have been successful when...	Next Step
Reading To retell in detail what I have read	To master this goal I have to: Use comprehension strategies to remember what I have read Include vocabulary from the text such as characters names and names of other nouns talk about the beginning, middle and end of the text discuss the text in order
Writing To use direct speech in my writing	To master this goal I have to: Spoken words need to be in speech marks (“Help me!” cried Mark.) Start a new line  every time a new speaker speaks . Use the correct punctuation
Maths: To master Stage 6, part 1:	I must be able to group within 100 using 5’s, Addition (45____=100) Groups within 100 5’s, subtraction (100-35=65) Know doubles (25+25=50) Know halves to 100, multiples of 10 (½) of 70=35 Know halves of 100 (½ of 66=33

Animal creation by Remco

This is my animal creation. We did this for topic.

Chasked hamlet

Habitat: Open woodland; plains with small thickets, medium and long grass, steppe; sub-Saharan Africa, Iran, Turkey and Turkmenistan Coral Reef; Western Atlantic Ocean and the Caribbean Sea.The most widely dispersed Southern African weaver, the chasked hamlet nests in trees and bushes near available water. Found in sub-Saharan Africa including South Africa, Angola, Zaire, Zambia, and Tanzania.

Diet: omnivore: eats meat and only eats plants if necessary

Head: cheetah

Chasked hamlet are one of the few bird’s who can purr. They also make other unusual sounds such as chirping, yelping, and bleating. Females live with the babies Males live with them until the cubis two to five weeks.chasked hamlet are one of the few big cats who can purr. They also make other unusual sounds such as chirping, yelping, and bleating. Females live alone except when they are raising cubs. Males live in coalitions of two to five members.

Body: Masked weaver

Chasked hamlet are named for their elaborately woven nests built of papyrus, grass, and twigs.They are round structures built hanging from a branch, with the entrance near the bottom. They look like funny fruit hanging from a tree! The male builds a nest for a female. If the female does not like the nest, he will tear it down and start over. If she does like the nest, she will line it with grass and feathers, and start raising a family. The male will then try to build a nest for another female.

Legs: masked weaver

They average 14 cm (5.5 in) in length.

Tail: golden hamlet

They normally but can out of the water live in shallow reefs in water depths of 10 to 40 m (33 to 131 ft). They are predatory fish and they establish their territories on top of the reefs. Chasked hamlets are one of about 12 varieties of hamlets.

Sounds: like a high pitched squawk sound normally.

Lifespan: Unknown

Scientific name:Aloceus gummigutta

Predators and threats:

Eagles, hyenas, lions, leopards, baboons, and humans.Forest clearance and degradation.Reef sharks

REMCO'S WW 1 LIFE IN THE TRENCH'S

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW 1 through a diary entry.