The lions failed feast( First draft)

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The lions failed feast (First draft) It was a typical day with the pack of lions we were hunting for food, It was late June in the African Savannah.We saw some buffalo,we were waiting for the buffalo to get closer, then the other lions noticed a baby whom we decided to take back to the pride.  It was  a great day to lie in the sun, we were just minding our own business,  when we noticed some buffalo walking towards us. We had found lunch, or maybe it found us, I started to move closer and closer. BOOM!!! The chase was on, my friend managed to catch the calf who got away but fell  in the water and the smell of lunch was the best smell all day. We started to drag the buffalo calf out of the water when… SNAP!! A crocodile interrupted our meal, I was not happy with him so we tried to take it from him it was tugowar and the winner gets lunch. We were able to keep the calf but then the buffalo had came back. Will we ever get lunch? I thought. We tried to stand our ground but there were too many I felt sad and ashamed when I got kicked by our own food and went flying 5 metres across into the river but after the end of the day we got something else to eat.The calf did taste nice though. But even though we got food at the end of the day, I was angry that our food bossed us around! So now my pride and I want revenge...