I thoroughly enjoyed reading your recount Remco. You made me feel as though I was there as you painted a great picture of what it would have been like in the trenches.
Nice work Remco I like the way you added in facts about sea turtles it is really interesting. My favorite thing was looking at the turtles, where did you get the facts from or did you write them yourself? And how did you make that slide show?
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DeleteGreat job Remco, you have done a really good job because I like how you described what it would be like to live in the war.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Remco, keep it up!
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DeleteI thoroughly enjoyed reading your recount Remco. You made me feel as though I was there as you painted a great picture of what it would have been like in the trenches.
ReplyDeleteNice work Remco I like the way you added in facts about sea turtles it is really interesting. My favorite thing was looking at the turtles, where did you get the facts from or did you write them yourself? And how did you make that slide show?
ReplyDeleteHey thanks for viewing my blog. I made it with google docs.
DeleteI got the facts of books and the internet.